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Blogs > MulleenofMelb > An exploration

Water warm rising  

MulleenofMelb 58M
2284 posts
5/5/2016 8:23 pm

Last Read:
5/8/2016 5:32 am
Water warm rising

Water warm rising
Water warm rising higher surrounds
we have moved from earth to different grounds
and in this substance transparent we did
remove all our clothing which bodies hid
our image of ourselves dressed in water
different from earth where self criticism know no quarter
this aqua adds as another set of stroking hands
seems all of Nature has erotic thoughts in its plan
our kisses wet are hotter in this moisture
and our sexual acts not appropriate for abbey cloister
instead this empty pool on Summer's eve
where our lives mundane behind we leave
for now our erotic sensual imaginations fly
and from these waters a lustful shrill cry
seems we can in these depths achieve
the loving coupling our minds believe
the possible and imagination coincide
freedom of this place brings us alive
kisses trace down shoulders<b> damp
</font></b>each sensual touch libido ramp
breasts breaking suction of water clear
to mouth and tongue brought near
consumed and nipple taut seduced
breathing shallow to husky pants reduced
bare are we as day we were born
upon each other our bodies worn
the water moves in ripples broad
and you cry out to the Lord
a shaking quivering explosion vast
as orgasmic tide breaks at last
embracing as water clothed we shake
clinging tight as loving tremors make
a set of waves high and moving
a mark of our delighted loving
and now as pool settles and slow our racing hearts
we leave beloved water to explore on earth other parts.

Thoughts in sensual pleasure to erotic writing writ.

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VenusRising11 71F
4677 posts
5/6/2016 1:15 am

 Parts of this, the first two lines in particular, have a haiku-like quality. It's lovely.


Venus Rising

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Nourish my mind.


MulleenofMelb replies on 5/8/2016 5:34 am:
trying to balance the vision with the words, and word play. To be light in tone, or heavy, or quick or slow, as the rhythm set must be, or too slow, pause, and enjoy the rolling strolling words...

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