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A Naughty Random Poetry Post
A Naughty Random Poetry Post I never paid any attention to keywords in my posts until a couple of bloggers I follow posted about their own. That was interesting, so I took a look at my own. It was, if not hilarious, pretty damn funny. I like flarf poetry, and I enjoy cut-up and fold in compositions anyway. Cut-ups are just that- cut and pasted phrases to create a different meaning not of the original context. Fold ins accomplish the same thing by folding the pages of a book inward so that their edges meet and reveal a new sentence. A little bit can go a long way, but the images that are conjured and then juxtaposed can be pretty interesting, and sometimes jarring. I figured I’d try using my keywords to create a poem, kind of like tossing the lines in a hat and drawing them out at random. But it appears that even that’s too much work- they’re pretty funny just as they come up in a hierarchical search. So! Without further ado, a keyword ode to “Take two- they’re small”, from the first fifteen lines of a keyword search. Love hike woods fuck head Water black virtual fucking Michigan Sunny watched dogs food third Dark straight trip English group Bound blogs parents America movies Death pain blood members sweat Wear brains shopping first time park Temperature giving drunk books stories Bottom word video bear email Eighteen writers Italian beer bare Owned events poetry animals control Rope sleeping tight pussy<b> damp </font></b>Hung bend beach website cock Phone weekend party college leash Catching sluts catholic engaged leather I limited all the verses to fifteen lines, just because. You could go on forever, but just like that game where you add the word fart to a movie title, after a short time you’re gonna be playing by yourself, just as if you were actually farting. For some readers, fifteen lines is going to be going fourteen lines too far, kind of like tooting coke. I’ve always thought this technique reads better, and is more effective, as verse than as prose, which is the way William S. Burroughs wrote with it originally. It matters how you see it visually. Hearing it read aloud can be powerful too, if the reader lets herself relax and just takes it in. You can string together lines to try to construct a certain image in the whole, but it helps to expand the raw material if you’re going to try this. It’s a challenge to edit and come up with even a surreal total picture if your word or phrase resource is too small. If you mix it up a little and pick lines that simply catch your eye, and even reverse the order on one or two, it’s just as much fun. Bitch boots house responses behave Greek mate biting Donald stroke Appearance prick culture bite mental Pregnant stiff furniture sweater Indian Twisted scent stomach toes bush Catching sluts Catholic engaged leather Rubber suck training trips expert Upgrade bone downtown faith Lesson balls rubbed teachers tongue Temperature giving drunk books stories Damp pussy tight sleeping rope Erection dirty queen cats bullet Chains anal holidays weed outdoors Therapist Toronto sore queer doctor Fetish alley heels huge dick slit It gets more interesting, and a lot funnier, if you rearrange the words in the lines. It’s really no longer completely random when you start exerting editorial control, but you’re still working with a limited vocabulary to construct imagery that’s not entirely of your making. You let the words choose themselves, in a way, but you can kind of nudge them a little to change what they express, to tweak the picture. I mined the keywords from my beautiful friend NaughtyInSO’s blog. For this I picked the lines that appealed to me and juggled the words in the lines until I liked the way they read. Then I shuffled the resulting lines around and rearranged the order. It’s a mad, it’s a mad, it’s a mad, and it’s a mad world: California strangers multiple meat romance Email virtual water love food Chocolate phone head shopping blogs Dirty erotic events bite background Messages dark black group cream Artist stories parked vanilla breasts America venus college teenage queen Nasty members dogs forced pain Control lovers service bottom books Trick education backyard shower balls Medical Italian mental singing skills Kissing latin cats booty call doctor Behave whining bone death guitar Platonic sluts library bitch author Visual throat condom rejection forum So that’s it. Poetry for those who can’t. Thank you, darlin’! And thank you William S. Burroughs. You are still with me. Become a member now and get a free tote bag. |
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Ha! Was it that boring, Leo? Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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Now that's what would look like if wrote poems. " I don't know what it means man, but it is provocative" Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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Awesome post- very entertaining!! Thanks (Virtual Symposium Group) use Virtual Symposium Group
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Awesome post- very entertaining!! Thanks Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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You keep talking like that and you'll see more of this, so be careful! Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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Now, after a quick wash up and change of panties, and after cleaning up my keyboard......... That was hilarious!!!!! You really did the fold and the juggle! Love it, my friend! Love it. Visit my blog It's a Mad, Mad, Mad World of NaughtyInSO, leave a comment, become a watcher. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ LIVE AND LET LIVE Be happy! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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This is the type of stuff kids listen to these days. It comes with a warning that it might trigger epilepsy. Bob Dylan he is not. I think Darwin got it wrong with his theory. You better copyright it, it could be the next hottest song. watch?v=gG_dA32oH44 "Rules for happiness: something to do, someone to love, something to hope for.”― Immanuel Kant .
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Great way to change things up. Will have to try that sometime. Drop in and visit my blog sometime, but you'll probably regret it
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That looks like fun so I might try it sometime but not tonight....I need to get to bed this side of midnight! ~~Anais Nin~~
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Your such a tease. like kinky said now that was a real turn on what you wrote hugs V Become a blog watcher sweet_vm
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Well that settles it. Anybody who doesn't care for reading this stuff will have to take it up with [blog kinkyfem73]. Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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Now, after a quick wash up and change of panties, and after cleaning up my keyboard......... That was hilarious!!!!! You really did the fold and the juggle! Love it, my friend! Love it. Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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This is the type of stuff kids listen to these days. It comes with a warning that it might trigger epilepsy. Bob Dylan he is not. I think Darwin got it wrong with his theory. You better copyright it, it could be the next hottest song. watch?v=gG_dA32oH44 Juxtaposing phrases that would be seem a bit disconnected and not quite incoherent ordinarily isn't new- it's the stringing together of images and thoughts in your head: She came in through the bathroom window Protected by a silver spoon But now she sucks her thumb and wonders By the banks of her own lagoon Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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Great way to change things up. Will have to try that sometime. Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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That looks like fun so I might try it sometime but not tonight....I need to get to bed this side of midnight! Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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Your such a tease. like kinky said now that was a real turn on what you wrote hugs V Hugggggs B Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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Oh I hate the poetry channel. I like when your blog is the nature channel much better. LOL! Speaking of which, how much are you willing to spend to keep your favorite programming alive? I'm offering a "Take two- they're small" tote bag for contributions of a hundred dollars. Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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Yes- I felt good about myself after finding that out too. I'm with you about "blood fetish". It sounds like a slasher movie. But I really do "Love email shower weekend head". Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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I was waiting for"Catching sluts catholic engaged leather" to change to "Catching Catholic sluts leather engaged", or would that be "wooden ruler engaged. " I looked at my keywords: fucking, fuck, head, weekend, weed. I think I need to expand my vocabulary! What the fuck's wrong with your fucking vocabulary? That actually sounds like a pretty good story to me: Fucking, fuck, head, weekend, weed. I've spent worse weekends, that's for sure. Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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I adore these types of word games. The results you have achieved a fantastically funny. Thanks for lightening my day An orgasm a day , makes you so much happier at work and play
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I guess I'm not sophisticated enough to appreciate it. I hate to say it but sometimes I do just read for the pictures. Yup I am that dumb I guess. Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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I adore these types of word games. The results you have achieved a fantastically funny. Thanks for lightening my day Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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Hilarious stuff. My brain hurt trying to picture all that. LOL I liked the Catching Catholic Sluts Engaged leather too. I also liked "Wear Brains Shopping First Time Park" and "rope sleeping tight pussy damp." LOL Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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chuckle well done kzoo.... well done
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Thanks Spunky. I speculated about the very thing. I think in my case, I love a lot of things, but that's part of being an incurable romantic isn't it? Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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chuckle well done kzoo.... well done Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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Thank you honey. I like reading cut-ups quite a bit, but I go in streaks with it. The same is true for creating them. But I'd been thinking about them since KItkat1415 and [blog spunkycumfun] brought them up quite some time ago. I had taken a look at my own and saw possibilities. One of these days i'll piss more readers off and compose a more selective piece using more keywords and editing more. My own favorite line is from Pet's blog, "California strangers multiple meat romance". Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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Exciting and funny at the same time......I guess we'll more of it WITHOUT PASSION LIFE IS NOTHING
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We'll SEE more of it!! WITHOUT PASSION LIFE IS NOTHING
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There are some really funny combinations in there lol. I wonder if that is how some musicians write songs? Some of the lines in the poems reminded me of song lyrics. Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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Exciting and funny at the same time......I guess we'll more of it Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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We'll SEE more of it!! Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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I'd be wringing out panties myself, if I wore 'em. I love your poetry, and yes, your leather Catholic girls inspired Betty Page fantasies. Someone really SHOULD stage photo interpretations of lines from this... Trust you've also discovered Brion Gysin? A long-ago girlfriend gave me an EP of his (yep, an EP, not an LP -- kids, ask your parents) titled "Orgy Boys" which included a nod in the credits to Patti Smith. My girlfriend's comment: "Patti Smith is an orgy boy?" Great stuff! Stop in, read, and offer comments at my "swinging as seen in the media" blog, "Confessions of a Lifestyle Man" humorlife, which is also the home of the monthly virtual symposium. New post: The Virtual Symposium Returns Lets Pick A Topic
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I didn't study Gysin the way I did Burroughs- I thought his ideas were interesting, and of course Burroughs was infatuated with him but I mostly just appreciated his influence. Some lines are funnier or more powerful than others when you do this- ya never know what you're gonna get. that's part of the fun of doing it. I think the technique made Burroughs a little too obscure though. He was a fine writer with a mystical style in a uniquely outrageous way in his own right. Become a member now and get a free tote bag.
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