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thoughts of you ..my first ever try at writing erotica.....more appriate post to some !!!
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thoughts of you ..my first ever try at writing erotica.....more appriate post to some !!!  Aching, for you. I even put on your favorite bikini ,the purple one that you bought me on our trip to Miami. I really shouldn't of done that,it reminds me of you watching me. Do you remember how, when wet, it exposed my large dark aroused nipples for all the world to see? Do you remember when I finally got my nerve up to take it off and lay there exposed?? I do. I can still feel the rays of the sun changing the color of my skin, feel the warm salty breeze as it swept over me, caressing me, making me feel so alive. How good your calloused hands made me feel when you rubbed tanning oil all over my exposed skin. I can still remember how it felt to be watched.....by you, by others. I can still see, feel the pleasure it caused you too. Do you remember that night?? I always have to catch my breath when I think of it. How excited I become, how wet, how hard , I still get after all these years when I think about it. I long to go back to that. The night when you skillfully, carefully applied the aloe vera on my sun burnt skin....my sun burnt breasts..... your strong hands being so gentle with me.... I can close my eyes and my body recalls every minute of it, I can feel you tracing the out line of my nipples with your fingertips, teasing them as you apply my comfort. How intriguing and erotic the sensation of pain and pleasure combined.... How we left the<b> curtains </font></b>wide open so anyone in the building next door could watch if they wanted to. Did anyone...A little moan escapes from deep within me as I remember... I shouldn't of done this today, I laid there battling my thoughts of you. I don't wont to remember how you feel, How you made me feel that night. But I fail msierably. I fall to the temptation. My warm skin is aching for you now. The wind is blowing causing me such sensations, sensations that you use to give me. It blows with such a fury at times today, it reminds me of the fury of your passion when you make love to me.... I got so caught up in my memory I didn't even noticed how my bikini top had slid down, leaving my breasts exposed to the sun, I didn't adjust it, I left it that way and just continued remembering.... to be continued if you'd all like..... Just remembering, becoming lost in my memory of, you and me. My body remembers every touch, every giggle, every moan and every scream... we made that night. I giggle as I think of you lying in the wet spot for the first time that night. I still try to resist this but I can't. The feelings of desire and pain. Of grief and joy are overwhelming me, will this memory forever haunt me...... I grab my tanning oil, it's so hot from the heat of the sun now.. slowly I begin to imagine, imagine that it is you once again touching me, pleasing me. Tears are beginning to pool within my eyes, now. I take my finger and drag it through my oil, I begin tracing, the outline of my face, like you did that night I moan as I touch my lips and gently outline, caress them with my fingertip just like you, I can feel the roughness of your fingers... Shivers run up and down my spine, you always did remember how sensitive my lips were Playfully I lick my finger, you like when I do that.... I can hear that song we heard as we explored our new found discovery of pain and pleasure combined. So fitting it was. The light, the heat in your eyes.... My heart aches as I remember, my honey pot is beginning to awaken now. I can feel the wetness escaping from within it. I drag my fingers down my neck and gently grab a hold of it, like you, you knew how I like that. I gasp again. A sob escapes from deep within my soul. I miss you so, Now I'm cupping my my exposed breasts from the sides, I extend my fingers so I can tickle my nipples rub the oil into them. The wind blows and increases the pleasure of it. I slide down further into my lawn chair now, I place my feet on the ground relax my legs and allow them to spread open, I fold down my bikini bottom so its just a patch barely covering me I lie there remembering how much you liked me doing that, how as people walked by they would gaze down upon me lyying there, bare breasted, so exposed... I wish you still found pride in me belonging to you like on that day, that night.... The tears are flowing easily now, running down my cheeks, down my neck pooling on my chest. I can see that look in your eyes I remember now how you looked right through me, how we never broke our gaze, I saw through you that night.... I saw your soul, for the first and last time. I think my heart is breaking in two I wanna stop but my body is screaming at me now touch me I wanna feel that way again. I wanna explode that way again.... I return to my lips and outline them again, I let me finger find its way down my body down to my honey pot now. It's so wet now, from the memory of you from the rays of the sun... gently I touch myself. I feel it, its so hard so erect ... It's begging for the caresses of your lips, your finger.... Slowly I began to rub, round and round my clitty my finger goes, my bikini is becoming soaked from my juices, from my sweat.... from thinking of you and me that night. I cup my breasts again I lift them to my waiting tongue hungrily I lick them.... gently I suck them... I close my eyes and see you between my legs, your fingers deep within me , slowly going in and out pleasuring me. I can see the hunger in your eyes. I grab your hair and guide you to my secret place, you know what I want, lick me.. but you don't, you make me wait... Your tongue's pressing firmly upon my hard wet clit now.. you start taking that tongue of yours and go round and round it, I can feel it plumping up even more. How my mouth longs to kiss you, to taste you to take you completely within in it. I wanna feel you glide across my lips, my tongue.. for you to touch the back of my throat.... I place one of my fingers in my mouth again, and imagine its you, mmmmm you taste so good, how wonderful you feel as you glide across my tongue my lips... Volts of electricity seem to flow between my lips and pussy now...bringing it to life even more Quickly I return to my honey pot, I slip my hands down deep within my bottoms now. I can feel my flesh it's hot, soaking wet. I grab a hold of my hard clitty and pinch it gently between my two fingers... I pinch hard then softer. I gently tug it stroke it, like you do. chills of pleasure and pain run up and down my body now. I can hear my own moans of pleasure. I can hear echos of your pleasure too. My nipples are so hard, so alive. I can feel the heat from the sun it feels like your moist hot breath. MY pulse races, remembering you.. remembering your touch. I close my eyes again and see you, me I wanna feel you again like I did that night but I cant... my soul cries out, but my desire to cum has over taken me. How my body remembers you entering me, so slowly so forcefully, Going in and out so slowly, banging me yet so hard...at the end of each stroke. MY pussy is throbbing begging for you to fill it. I spread my legs even further, you like when I do that don't you. I see that look again the light, the heat the fury of your passion for me, Your going deeply within my pussy now I've went back to rubbing now faster and faster I make my fingers go. The tears flow, my heart aches for you. I'm completely lost to my memory, a growling sound escapes from the back of my throat.. I slow down I feel it coming round and round my clitty my finger goes... it begins to throb to squeeze. I close my legs together tightly Waves of pleasure ripple over me again and again. I feel my juices gushing out, my pussy is squeezing harder now, faster now. I rub fast now, I want to keep cumming. I need to keep cumming. I wanna stay in my memory... but, that feeling overtakes me, that empty feeling, that longing for it to be you and me, that night again. I stop now and begin to grieve all over again....... much love and Big Smiles © 2007 Loveslilies pleae comment, it stinks to spend time and energy writing these and getting no feedback 4  if love isn't the answer, than I misunderstood the question |
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it is well written. keep it up. I can almost imagine the scene
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You just keep longing for me and these posts will be great!   No just kidding but it is well written it flows together really. really well....good enough to get a near visualization of it all! Keep it up, it keeps me up!  Greater Than The Sum Of My Constituent Parts! 
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jerry mag, thank you for the nice comment 4 if love isn't the answer, than I misunderstood the question
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 hun I have a few nastier ones do you enjoy that type yoo ??4 if love isn't the answer, than I misunderstood the question
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Honey I love all type of them esp wrote like you do Greater Than The Sum Of My Constituent Parts!
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Very well writen and was glued to it only wishing that I was there to share in the bliss. I could almost taste your juices as I read. Keep up the good work.
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Your words do paint quite a picture ... and they sustain their visualization for some time! LOVE your writing .... and I'm sure your naughtier ones are equally as good as visualizing! Big Smiles
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getlucky, not all of them or like this my first try ended up being my best  4 if love isn't the answer, than I misunderstood the question
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wow thanks for such a great comment tedbear 4 if love isn't the answer, than I misunderstood the question
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I hope they do thank you, bigsmiles 4 if love isn't the answer, than I misunderstood the question
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thanks wild bill have you ever tried to write / its hard edit n things up so many times to get it just right. 4 if love isn't the answer, than I misunderstood the question
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10/30/2014 10:35 am |
Wow! great story.. I could feel the heat! I think you depicted the story perfectly! Thank you for sharing. Kisses K
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 glad you enjoyed it4 if love isn't the answer, than I misunderstood the question
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1 post 3/4/2019 6:46 am |
Simply put, you are one of a kind! Easy to understand why you are so loved.........
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