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just a story that, sadly I am still working on  

N1c777776 44M
182 posts
11/5/2016 12:02 pm
just a story that, sadly I am still working on

Michelle was driving home gloriously lost in the monotony that is her daily commute. Why hadn't Ray been more receptive to her advances last night. Did she do something wrong. SO lost was she that she almost missed the rough gravel road that is her driveway. Ray's car was still there He had taken the day off to work to get his stuff packed away and settle into her house that they now shared. Their house she corrected herself.

Ray and Michelle had met 6 months earlier on one of those online dating web sites, date a cub she thought as she put her car into park. After a few months she had asked him to move in, even though she had her doubts she knew that this man challenged her, made her want to smile , and best of all could keep up with her erratic brain.

As she collected her belongings from her suv she became determined to have a talk about why they had not made love last night. As she closed the door she noticed something odd, there were not lights on inside the house. She could barely make out what appeared to be a flicker of candlelight coming from the bedroom. Why would he have<b> candles </font></b>lit, she brushed off the thought as she opened the door.

Michelle walked through the front door to see Ray standing there with a devilish grin on his face. She started to ask what was going on but Ray sensing that she was about to speak put his finger gently to her lips. Only then did she notice what he was holding in his other hand. He raised his hand and brushed the silk against her cheek. Then slowly he placed the cloth over her eyes. Still confused she allowed herself to be overcome with the darkness.

After a few moments he placed her hand in his and started to lead her through the house. Seconds later she made the turn that would be their bedroom and out of a small opening at the bottom of the blindfold she could see he had indeed placed<b> candles </font></b>out. In fact the bedroom was dimly lit. That is when Ray stopped her. Her heart started to race, had he planned something for them this evening.

Ray had still not made a sound and she dared not break the silence. After a minute or to ray rain his fingers through her hair, then with the back of his hand started to move down her ear to her neck. The motion set a wave of goose bumps down her body and a soft sigh escaped her lips. His hands kept going as 1 by 1 he started to remove her clothes. Jacket, shirt, pants...each time using the back of his hand to tease the skin the previous articles had removed. As ray removed her panties he gently kissed her stomach allowing his lips to make a trail to her hips, then thighs. Further still toe her toes where he gently kissed the top of her foot.

Michelle's heart was beating faster now as Ray again started to guide her to their bed. As He lay her gently in the middle of the bed and she could hear ray start to get up. She reached for him, grabbing hold of his hand. Taking her hand in his he placed her hand back on the bed.

Seconds later she felt him once again press on the bed. She inhaled deeply as she felt him place something to her mouth and start to outline the contour of her lips. The first thing she noticed as she opened her mouth. Chocolate, warm melted chocolate immediately hit her taste buds as the small piece of apple came in. This is going to be a very good night she though as Rays lips met hers. Ray then delicately licked the chocolate from her lips. She chewed and then savered the sweet taste of the chocolate as she swallowed. A very good night.

Moments later she felt ray start to move again. Bracing herself for another piece of fruit she felt a warm sensation around her belly button. She started to raise her head as she felt the next bit hit her lips. As she bit into the small piece of banana she felt Rays tongue once more licking the chocolate from where it had landed on he body. His tongue dancing around teasingly. He seemed to be enjoying himself so she removed the mask from her eyes and looked around.

He had went through a lot of time to set this up, she saw the plate of fruit and bowl of chocolate. Apples, Bananas, and her favorite strawberries. As he finished licking he placed another small kissed and turned up to see she had removed the blindfold. He gave her a small shake of the head as he reached over to grab a strawberry and slowly dipped it in the chocolate. This time as he brought his hand towards her she turned her head and pulled it gently to rest on her neck, allowing the chocolate to land slightly below her ear. He placed the berry into her mouth and started licking along the her neck making a line toward the chocolate. She swallowed as his lips came to rest and the soft skin of her earlobe where he gave her a slight nip with his teeth and pulled ever so gently. A small groan traveled up her throat as she though how much she liked this game and where she would place the next bit of the chocolate.

As he started to again bring his hand to her lips, she caused the chocolate to land on her already excited nipples. Left then right and brought his hand to her mouth. Not missing his que Ray started his tongue on her left breast starting at the base and slowly working his way up and making an outline of her areola. As he removed the chocolate he gave her another kiss and nipped at her nipple. Starting in the same fashion he licked the chocolate off of her right breast. Once again lingering at her nipple, this time allowing himself to suck on it for a brief second.


N1c777776 44M

11/5/2016 12:04 pm

figured I would say this is a repost from my last account and I also added pics 1 for the guys and 1 for the ladies


Tmptrzz 61F  
107039 posts
11/5/2016 12:22 pm

You have amazing skills, this is a great story I can't wait to see what happens when you finish this..

Seduce the mind and see what a wonderful adventure the body will take you on..


N1c777776 replies on 11/5/2016 12:31 pm:
You are very kind to say so, thank you. I am delighted that you enjoyed it.

nicelipss66 48F
24236 posts
11/5/2016 1:14 pm

Thank you for sharing


N1c777776 replies on 11/5/2016 1:16 pm:
The pleasure is in the reading. So no....Thank you for reading

LiveLifeDoU 69F  
2199 posts
11/5/2016 5:22 pm

Why the sadness? Part of the fun of writing is in the writing...the exploration of what your characters will do next, finding just the right scintillating words to perfectly convey the scents, the feelings, the excitement.
Keep up the good work!


N1c777776 replies on 11/6/2016 12:01 am:
Thank you for reading and the comment. You are right, I guess I am sad that I wrote this over 4 years ago and have yet to attempt the next scene.

N1c777776 44M

11/8/2016 3:56 am

    Quoting  :

I am glad you liked it. I'LL mail you the plane ticket, lol. Thanks for reading


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