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A short story - Part 2
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A short story - Part 2 (READ PART 1 FIRST) IF YOU LIKE--Please send my an email. I'd like the feedback. NOTE: I'm not a professional writer...just a suffering man with a lot of passion locked inside of me. This are my original words--not to be reproduced or used without my permission. He quickly entered the room and locked the door. She was lying on the second bed from the door and the one closest to the bathroom. She was wrapped in a white towel and it was fastened in the back. “Perfect,” he thought to himself. She instinctively tried to sit up, but he quickly said “No, not now, please lie back down,” and made the universal “stop” gesture with his hand. At this, she submitted and fell back on her stomach, but kept a constant and nervous stare on him with her head tilted to the right. He stood at the door a moment just to admire her beauty and willingness. It would appear from his vantage point she had done all he asked and now willingly awaited his arrival. It was erotic to witness the trust level in action and he could feel his member starting to stir. His approach was slow, almost animalistic as that of predator to prey. He could sense her nervousness so he sat on the side of the bed in an effort to ease her. He whispered, “Please try to relax, you’ve done your part, now it’s my turn.” He continued, “all I ask is for you to put your arms above your head and let me have all of you.” As a response, she slowly raised her arms and tucked them under the pillow so they crossed each other. He turned and slid down the bed where he could easily reach her feet because that's where he wanted to start. He reached out and touched the side of her ankle and began to draw a circle around her ankle bone, ever so gently. She rewarded him by a gentle pelvic thrust down into the bed. “Wholly crap!” she thought to herself, “and that’s just my foot!” He leaned over and kissed her ankle at the same spot his fingers occupied. Her senses started to tingle with pleasure. Seeing she enjoyed this, he lifted her leg up so it was bent ninety degrees with her foot in the air. From this position, he put her big toe in his mouth. She was amazed at the strange pleasure felt throughout her body in “all” the right places. "Wow," she mumbled out loud, and again rewarded him with a light pelvic rub on the bed. At this same point, he gently rubbed her calf muscle up to the area behind her knee. "So many areas to explore," he said as he briefly removed her toe from his mouth. He continued his oral massage on each of her toes, working down from the big toe to the pinky. She felt a different, and yet stimulating, response with each. She was amazed at the simple pleasure obtained from this overlooked body part. Tantalizing waves of pleasure tingled throughout her body. “I never imagined that could feel that good” and he responded, “we’ve only just started, and I’m not done with your feet yet.” At this, he slid off the bed to the floor. His position was now on his knees and her legs were laid back down. He looked to see a glance of her “woman” under the towel but couldn’t, so he eased her legs further apart, but still no “peeping” was allowed as the towel prevented any sight-seeing. Once he was satisfied with the toes, he moved to the arches of both feet, taking his time to French kiss both equally while his hand slowly slid up her legs. One hand on the inside and one on the outside rubbing the calf muscle, then on to the knee, and further to the thigh, then ever so close to the pussy, but not touching it. “How can this be possible,” she thought to herself. Seeing her pleasure intensifying, he decided it was time to move up with his mouth. He slowly began on the left leg, moving his mouth from her ankle, over the calf muscle. “There are so many areas often missed when pleasuring a woman,” he said and then returned to sucking and kissing behind her knee. He worked this area thoroughly, bouncing back between each leg. Once satisfied, he moved up onto the bed and sat on his knees. He was positioned in between her legs as he gently spread her legs by pushing outwardly on her inner thighs. At this time, he took his t-shirt off and tossed it in the floor. “I want to feel you on my chest and the shirt is in the way,” he said as he also unfastened the towel exposing her tanned back for the first time. He paused and admired the view. Her ass was full and round and perfect. He noticed the two dimples at the lower part of her back and said, “my dear, those are one of my favorites places on the woman’s body,” and begin to rub them with his fingers. “What's that?” she said as she enjoyed his touch. “Have you noticed your ‘Dimples of Venus’ on your lower back?” he asked. She responded, “dimples of what?” in her Southern accent. He replied, continuing to draw circles around the two dimples, “these two dimples on your lower back are called your 'Dimples of Venus,' and they're very erotic.” Then, he began to smile as he said, “it would appear you've missed a few spots with your tanning also.” She responded, “yeah, it happens when I lay on my back in the bed.” She continued, “will that be a turn off for you?” He reassured her, by bending down and using his tongue to explore each of her 'Venus dimples.” He said between kisses: “you'll do,” and chuckled. After the dimples were wet from his saliva, he began to slowly move his tongue down to the top of her ass. He stopped at her tailbone, and opened his mouth and French kissed this area, all the while, grabbing her ass firmly—one hand on each cheek. Now, he pulled up his head far enough to see her pussy and he used his hands to pull apart her ass cheeks, admiring the parting of her vagina labia. “Your pussy is perfect,” he said as he returned to the top of her tailbone. Slowly, moving his mouth toward her pussy, he took in a long breath of her pussy and said, “and you smell incredible, but, we'll have to wait on that.” Her body was on fire as if someone doused her with gas and threw the match on her to get her super enraged. She was in and out of reality and enjoying every second—finding it difficult to keep still. Now, if on retreat, he moved his mouth back up past her tailbone and back to the dimples, stopping for a brief moment to wet them again with his mouth. From here, he moved to the right of her lower back and began sucking on the area. She responded, “oh man, that feels so good,” she said, making more pelvic grinding on the bed. He said, “my job is to find all your 'spots' and get them alive to my touch. “Well, I'm 'alive' alright,” she said, now arching her ass off the bed. He said, “I hope you don't mind if I take my time,” and at this he moved his mouth up her right side, slowly using his lips and tongue to moisten her skin. She did not answer, but her body did, as she continued to grind the bed. “But, please give me a moment,” he said as he stood and stripped naked, “I need to get more skin-on-skin contact.” She simply replied saying, “oh my.” Now, naked, he stood at the end of the bed, fully enjoying the view. She turned her head and asked, “is there something wrong,” and he replied, “no baby, everything is just perfect. I'm just enjoying the view.” After this, he remounted her body, sitting on the area between her knees and ass. Slowly he bent over, allowing his dick to touch her inner thighs. With his hands, he reached up and brushed her hair from her face to expose her neck and shoulder and then bent down and kissed her neck. Now, his full body weight was on her, pressing his dick into her thighs...grinding it against her. She responded by raising her ass to make a stronger contact. Now, the kissing on the neck registered in her brain and along with the stimulus from his dick...it was almost too much for her. Her pussy was now soaked and throbbing with pleasure and she was starting to think “how much more can I handle?” He continued to lightly kiss her neck while having his dick now moving up slightly toward her pussy. He added his hands, grabbing her below her armpits on both sides, massaging as he touched her. His mouth moved to her left hear where he gently whispered, “having fun yet,” getting the obvious response with only more body movement. He continued on the left side then asked her to turn to the right and repeated the same routine on that side. Satisfied, he stopped and sat up. “You have an amazing body and you taste so good,” he said looking down on her upper back and neck. “Thank you,” she said, barely audible. At this, he began to massage both her shoulders and both sides of her neck. Firmly, he used his hands and fingers to relax her muscles. He lingered for a while on the shoulders and neck, and then methodically worked down her spine, massaging all her back muscles. He worked down to the top of her hips, but now, softer with his touch, almost teasing with his touch. It was at this point, he said, “ok, one side done,” standing up he asked, “would you please turn over?” She was hesitant at first, but, then willingly submitted and turned over, tossing the towel to the floor. Now, they faced each other for the first time. He stood naked in front of her at the end of the bed as she laid naked on her back on the bed. He watched her eyes as they stared at his face, then slowly moved down his body, stopping at his hard dick, she said, “nice dick.” He replied, “thank you, but I need you to stop talking.” She was slightly insulted and her face reflected this. He noticed and reassured her by saying, “baby, I want to please you—talking tends to distract from the pleasure—so please just be quite and lie there.” With this, he grinned so she knew he was joking—sort of. She moved her arms down to her sides so the first thing he did was to tell her to put her arms above her head and leave them there. “Now, close your eyes,” he said to her, as he continued to stand and gaze on her body. Her body was perfect in his eyes. Her breasts were perfectly formed with large round nipples—his favorite. Her stomach was flat, and although not a “six-pack”, it was not fat by any means. Her “woman” was shaved smooth and her labia were swollen and exposed to the eye. “Very nice,” he thought to himself. He ran his eyes down her legs to her feet, straining to find any imperfections—he found none. She finally opened her eyes and asked, “are you going to stand there all day?” Now, he was defensive and said, “I told you to close your eyes and not to talk—I'm enjoying the view.” She sighed and said, “fine”, and made a funny face, and closed her eyes again. At this, he leaned down, placing his hands on the bed to hold his body up. He began to kiss the top of her calf muscle on her right leg, then moved to the left, slowly moving up to her knees, then to her thighs. Again, methodically between both thighs. Now, he got on the bed, with his chest lying flat on the bed between her legs. He paused and admired her wet pussy. “Very nice,” he thought to himself again. And at that, he moved his mouth ever so close to her pussy, but did not touch it. He breathed on her, allowing his exhaled air to be the only touch...at this point. She reacted by lifting her pussy to his face in an effort to get his mouth to touch her, but he reacted and pulled away. He continued up with his mouth skipping her clitoris and landing by her belly button. He stopped and tongued her belly button sending shivers all through her body. “No one has ever done that before,” she said with a moan. He stopped for a while there, allowing his hands to lightly touch both her sides, rubbing up to her armpits and back down again. He used the back sides of this hands and fingers to get a most sensual feel. She just moaned, growing more restless with desire. He moved his mouth and body suddenly and without warning—directly to her mouth, but not touching. Again, he breathed on her, and her eyes opened instinctively as she expected a kiss. In response, he placed a finger to her lips and shook his head in the “no” way. She rolled her eyes and closed them again. After this, he started moving down with his mouth. Right across her sternum and down to her arm pit under her right arm. He licked and kissed her underarm, and watched her nonverbal cues to the sensitivity level. "Good," he thought, "you're not too sensitive there." At this, he continued kissing under her arms and up to the inside of her arms. At this point, he placed both hands on each side of her face and licked her from the neck, skipping her mouth, up to her forehead...She could not stand it. She wanted to kiss him so bad. Ignoring her mouth, he moved his face down to her breasts and began to massage up from her stomach while his lips and tongue explored her breast—not the nipple though. She craved his mouth on her nipples, as she pressed her breast toward his mouth. He only teased the nipple again by using his exhaled warm air to touch the nipple. In response, she moaned as her nipple instantly went hard. He continued the breast massage, moving his tongue all around each nipple, but not touching the nipple itself. She went crazy with desire and passion. So, again, he moved his mouth up to kiss her, but pulled away, only to land on her cheek and then her neck. “Oh, you're evil,” she said in a cute way, and he responded, “you have no idea,” in a whisper in her ear. Now, he moved back down to her breast, but this time, circling her nipple with his tongue; working outside to inside. Then suddenly he took her right nipple completely in his mouth, sucking on it deeply and passionately. She reacted with an explosive moan of pleasure as her body went stiff for a moment. He pulled his mouth back so that the nipple landed between his teeth and he gently bit down. Again, more pleasure but stronger now. He continued to bite the nipple, but now flicking his tongue firmly and quickly over it. Still, even more pleasure. His left hand grabbed her nipple on the opposite breast and he twisted it between his index finger and thumb. Even still, her pleasure increased as her back arched. He continued this on both breasts, alternating with his mouth and fingers. “How long can this go one,” she thought to herself as her pussy throbbed and moistened. SUDDENLY--AND QUICKLY---he rushed his face towards her and kissed her. They both exploded with passion and her arms wrapped around him and pulled him close, as if she wanted to pull him through her body. He grabbed her face with his hands and pulled her closer. Their tongues met in a deep and long kiss. As they kissed, he pushed his dick and balls into her pelvis giving her a taste of what's to come. She pleaded, “I want you inside me now!” But, his response was calm and collective: “you're not ready yet.” She heard this and rolled her eyes. In response, he grabbed her arms and pushed them up above her head again. “We still have a lot to do,” he said as his mouth began to go southward to her nipples again. He spent more time on each nipple, then worked his way back down to her navel. He tongued her navel again while twisting both nipples together. Her body reacted with another arching of her back. He moved his mouth down to just above her clitoris. Close enough so he could smell her again. He inhaled long and deep enjoying the smell of her “woman” and that sweet aroma that only a woman can produce. He moved his mouth down the sides of her pussy, quickly passing it by as he started kissing her inner thigh. “This is insane,” she admitted out loud. He could feel her passion building within her at every touch. No matter where he touched her—she responded with positive feedback. But, again at this point he stopped and sat up. She responded by asking “what's wrong?” In response, he told her again, “I just want to enjoy you with my eyes as well as my body.” He spread her legs with his hands and gazed down at her throbbing-wet pussy. The seconds seemed like hours. He was recording it all in his mind so this moment could be relived again. He slowly worked his view up past her breast to her eyes, which were now open. He said, “your eyes have the 'look' and I think you're ready.” As she tried to reply, he placed his hand on her mouth and stopped her. He followed by quickly and passionately kissing her again. He let his mouth convey the passion that was dying to be come forth. When he kissed her, he not only opened his mouth, but he also opened his entire body to her. He let you her feel him from the outside in. His passion poured over her from his mouth through his hands and his bare chest. Every part of him ached to touch her. Kissing completed, he thought, “now for the good part,” as his mouth quickly went Southward to her pussy. He took his time to kiss every inch of both her hips before moving to her inner thigh. He worked around to her pussy and she thought, "finally, he'll<b> touch my pussy.</font></b>" But, again, he slowly moved up and kissed her nipples and then her mouth again. After this kiss, he got off the bed and onto his knees and in one fluid motion—pulled her pussy toward him—putting her legs over his shoulders. From there he went straight to her clitoris and locked his mouth on her. She screamed with pleasure and reached orgasm the second her clitoris was in his mouth. She yelled, “Oh my God...I'm cumming...oh my God...what are you doing to me.” He responded by moaning deeply allowing the vibrations of his moan to reverberate through her pussy. She was insane at this point. He continued with his mouth on her clitoris putting her “clit” between his teeth and flicking it as he did her nipples before. He received the immediate reaction he desired—that of the arched back and moaning. He was relentless and would not let up. She rewarded his efforts with back to back orgasms and now her inner thighs began to twitch uncontrollably. He noticed and said, “how could a woman fake that kind of response and orgasm?” Giving her clit a break, he moved his mouth down to her labia and sucked them into his mouth, careful to take in all her wetness. He took his time here and inserted his tongue in and out of her pussy like a dick. She loved this. Satisfied, he continued to lick down towards her ass, concentrating on the area in between the pussy and the ass. Suddenly, he pulled her legs up and inserted his tongue in her ass. She filled with pleasure, but that of a different kind. “Oh my God, what are you doing,” she exclaimed but he does not answer. “That feels so freaking good but also so weird,” she moaned. Never in her life had someone put their tongue in her ass. She was intrigued by the pleasure. He continued to suck and tongue your ass while he used his nose to tease and pleasure her pussy. After her ass was nice and wet, he moved back to her pussy. Again, sucking hard on all of her labia—adding to the throbbing feeling. He continued sucking hard for several minutes, then stopped to admire her fully swollen pussy. “Nice and wet and swollen,” he thought to himself as he then said: “Perfect.” He started on her clit again grabbing it with his mouth and teeth and quickly and firmly moving his tongue up-and-down, side-to-side. He could feel her body tense and release again with his hands on both her hips. At this point, her inner thighs twitched uncontrollably and her orgasms were frequent. He had once told her these early orgasms were like the first steps of a climb up a long staircase. He said that each orgasm would represent another step—each adding intensity and passion. She could feel his meaning now as her body tensed and then relaxed, then exploded violently. After several minutes on her pussy and with his mouth filled with her cum, he pulled up and kissed her mouth. He ensured all her wetness was shared in their passionate kiss. He wore a goatee and it was soaked also so he rubbed it on her lips. She responded by licking and tasting her juices. This turned them both on to a higher level. While kissing this time, he moved his hand to her pussy and insert two fingers. The reaction was immediate and her kissing became uncontrollable. Mouth, lips, tongue all moving without any sense of purpose. She was moaning and completely emerged in the moment. It was perfect. He found her “spot” with his fingers and massaged it hard pulling his mouth away and quickly grabbing a nipple between his teeth. Both of them were losing control now as the passion was building. “I'm cumming again,” she exclaimed reacting to the pleasure. “Oh man I”m cumming again,” she repeated. A smile came on his face. Once that orgasm subsided, he pulled the two fingers out of her pussy and put them to her mouth touching her lips with them. She instinctively opened and took them into her mouth tasting herself as she did so. She moaned and made the “mmmmm” sound, showing approval of the taste once more. From here, he returned his mouth to her pussy and he continued for what seemed like eternity. She climbed many more steps of the metaphorical staircase, cumming hard with each new step. When she was at the point of climax again, he quickly inserted a finger in her ass. “Oh my God!,” she screamed with pleasure. “That fucking feels so good!” she said as he worked her ass more. “Do you like that?” he asked, as he now was biting down on her clit while fingering her ass. “Yeah, baby,” I love it. He asked, “how about harder” as hit bit down harder while continuing to flick her clit between his teeth. “Right there baby—just like that,” she said assuring him he had the correct force. At that point, another orgasm consumed her and again her thighs twitched uncontrollably. Her entire body convulsed in a powerful release. Finally, he pulled he fingers from her ass and slid her legs open. He moved his body up on her as if to insert himself inside her, but he did not. He pulled up and let his balls touch her clitoris and while grinding his dick into her abdomen. He then looked down on her face and said, “I want you so badly, and fell on her mouth for another kiss. He reached for her arms and pulled them around him, symbolically releasing her from her “bondage.” After the long kiss, he propped himself up on this hands and looked into her eyes. It was time. He slowly inserted his dick into her pussy and watched her eyes roll and her mouth open. He went all the way in and felt the full warmth and depth of her “woman.” Then, he stopped, deep inside her, and felt her body almost conform to his dick. He could feel the contraction-like orgasm consume her. Her passion exploded again. She screamed and moaned as they continued for many orgasms and for many minutes. Finally, when he felt she was at the top step, he inserted a finger into her ass and started fucking her hard. At this point, she was completely gone to reality as all her erogenous zones were alive and inflamed. She thought about nothing as nothing mattered. The last orgasm was powerful, resulting in a gush of water flowing from her. Covering herself and him and the bed. “What was that?” she exclaimed in a pleasurable tone? He laughed, and said, “I think you're done.” |
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