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Still Night  

senfully 55F  
618 posts
5/22/2021 9:35 am
Still Night

Still Night
written May th, 2021

The stillness
of dark night
surrounds me
swallowing the light
suspending animation
sinisterly whispering
stealing my breath
stifling me

and I wonder
how long will it be
still night.

senfully 55F  
443 posts
5/22/2021 9:37 am

 So many "s" words! I do love when it makes sense to focus on something like that. Spent a couple days running to my notebook to write down another one. But not too many "s" words at one time. And I loved the transition from the opening peaceful still night, to the ending, how long will this night go on? lol. Oh the joys of insomnia.


flannel_light 61F
4586 posts
5/22/2021 1:26 pm

 You do write so beautifully. I was up and down the other night like that.
The Light is shinning and she is lonely and waiting in the darkness.


senfully replies on 5/22/2021 2:14 pm:
So many of us are. Hoping you'll get some rest soon.

kamaruhl3 63M
4985 posts
5/22/2021 2:11 pm

 beautiful. love both of these


senfully replies on 5/22/2021 2:15 pm:
Thank you! Always good to see you. hugs.

Ultraviolet_Sol 43M
622 posts
5/22/2021 11:50 pm

 I like that this piece contains the potential for multiple interpretations, and the flow is great with the alliteration.
*. *. *


senfully replies on 5/23/2021 4:17 am:
Thank you. Trying to process stuff. Maybe each poem is a little progress? lol.

69ereatwetpussy 61M
6774 posts
5/26/2021 4:54 am

 Till the night fade away
The sun comes up to stay
Washing the night away
It's a new start to a new day.
Sleep well
Then enjoy your day
XOXOXO


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