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The Day After
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The_Day_After .I. Yesterday. We walked an [undulating] red carpet. A frequency proposing to my mind And perception A two way road - In my eyes - In my mind Multi-dimensional Simultaneous. My arm was draped over your shoulder. You reached up to touch my hand - As we staggered over the surface Of our world - Disfigured reconfigured. .II. We walked through doors together. [You and I] On the other side. Steam arose from the bathwater in the letters of [love] Smoke arose from my marijuana cigarette In the letters of [evol] We are in a different world now. .III. Your kiss enters my [mind] and [heart] A two way road My kiss enters your [heart] and [mind]j Your body against my body My life of ink comes to the surface. You are the greatest inspiration. Earth - Air - Fire - Water - Endless beaches of sands of time. You are a kaleidoscopic conglomeration. Let my darkness become your darkness. .IV. I close my eyes My most fervent wish For my darkness to become your darkness So I can send away the phantoms And embrace you with the power That you inspire within me .V. Today = [Vice] (+) [Indulgence] Lying dormant In the remnants of their utilization. Until we arose from the pillows on the bed - Pure and naked. Each of us a wing of a dark phoenix. Clean [Eye] saw your [Eyes] I turned you over And planted a murderers row of kisses Your lips - Your cheek - Your neck - Your body (To hear an audio recording of this production = [channel slash UCGbs10s9YzY1XZYGR9-iFMw slash videos] *. *. *
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Cool. [you tube][dot com][slash][channel][UCGbs10s9YzY1XZYGR9-iFMw][slash][featured] *. *. *
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Very nice. Your writing transports one into a different mindscape. I enjoyed it very much so. My name is MrWrong and I approved this comment
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4/27/2021 3:47 am |
One of the main thing about this site, is the blogging! There are some good creative writers on this site! When someone can write something and you can vision what they wrote too. They are good writer! In New mexico, we had a place that one Tuesday a month, you can go to this bar and listen to poetry/poem and you can read yours too. People that participated would vote on the best 3 poem. I cost like 10 bucks to enter, all the money donated when to the 3 best poets. I heard one time they have over 120 poets, but 80 participated.
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Love the formatting that contributes to the meaning and reading of the poem. I also could not get the link to work. Tried a few different combinations of the components, but I am bad at things like that.
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Very nice. Your writing transports one into a different mindscape. I enjoyed it very much so. That is a very kind and encouraging comment. *. *. *
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One of the main thing about this site, is the blogging! There are some good creative writers on this site! When someone can write something and you can vision what they wrote too. They are good writer! In New mexico, we had a place that one Tuesday a month, you can go to this bar and listen to poetry/poem and you can read yours too. People that participated would vote on the best 3 poem. I cost like 10 bucks to enter, all the money donated when to the 3 best poets. I heard one time they have over 120 poets, but 80 participated. That is true on both accounts. There are some awesome writers and people here, and your insight into writing. That bar sounds cool... So at 10x120=1200 damn... that aint bad at all... Probably a hell of an evening! I would definitely have to try. *. *. *
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Love the formatting that contributes to the meaning and reading of the poem. I also could not get the link to work. Tried a few different combinations of the components, but I am bad at things like that. I love your insight. I also love the way you yourself incorporate different forms and mechanisms to contribute to the meaning. Definitely inspires me. I am going to try to write out the thing differently. The more I think of it, such a place... That is, a medium for spoken word, could be pretty cool. Like maybe learning to add in music. I was listening to some Blues and Chopin today and the thought occurred to me. Or learning how to work with different softwares to do different stuff... Technology really gives us a lot of tools, creatively. *. *. *
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I DON'T KNOW ANYMORE!!! lol Okay this is my channel. Copied and pasted from the browser and carefully written here. you tub e. co m/c hannel /UCGbs10s9YzY1XZYGR9-iFMw/ feature Let me know if that works. Also, what you think. *. *. *
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I tried typing the address in my browser also and it did not work, but I bookmarked the page and that link works. Thank you for the taking the time to try!!! Okay... I tried typing did not work. Directly copied and pasted from word pad and worked. Not shore why that would be. I am looking into encrypted images or something like this but if it works when you copy and paste but not when you type. hmm. maybe a solution. I hope you are having a pleasant evening. *. *. *
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We've done it Igor! Look up my username here, on link tree, there is a link there to the thing thingy. Let me know if this works. *. *. *
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Woot woot indeed. That is cool. Thank you for your time and energy in the matter! And your kind words of encouragement. I think it could be kind of cool to interact creatively with this space. *. *. *
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Hmm.. Are you referring to the Anglican Monastery near Aurora Ontario ? I used to sneak in and swim in that lake , walk my dogs there about 20 years ago ...
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Hmm.. Are you referring to the Anglican Monastery near Aurora Ontario ? I used to sneak in and swim in that lake , walk my dogs there about 20 years ago ... Thank you for reading and commenting *. *. *
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