Comfort loneliness 谁能慰籍  

Yukisan2021 52F
123 posts
8/5/2021 10:36 am
Comfort loneliness 谁能慰籍

I was ready to meet
Excitedly anticipating
To have a good time together
But he missed the appointments
Leaving me waiting in loneliness
It was late at night but I could not sleep
There is no place to tell my heart
Who can comfort my emptiness

我做好了一切准备
满心欢喜的期待着
共度美好欢乐时光
他竟然失约了两次
让我寂寞的等待着
夜已深却辗转难眠
心里有话无处可诉
谁能慰籍空虚的心

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danfunone69 35M
178 posts
8/9/2021 3:40 am

I like your poems - very nicely written


Yukisan2021 replies on 8/20/2021 6:51 am:
Thank you

super74u 65M
7 posts
8/9/2021 4:48 am

让我填补你那寂寞的心灵
I wish to comfort your loneliness, come to me


Yukisan2021 replies on 8/9/2021 4:32 pm:
嗯。。。等你

Yukisan2021 52F
106 posts
8/9/2021 4:51 am

    Quoting danfunone69:
    I like your poems - very nicely written
Thanks... do you understand Chinese poems?


shyan3310 49M
108 posts
8/9/2021 6:58 am

我呢?可以嗎?😊😊


Yukisan2021 replies on 8/13/2021 3:42 am:
可以哦!发信息给我吗?

Pornny_Pornnyyy 49M
691 posts
8/27/2021 9:20 pm

Nice chinese poem wanna to took over it ^0^


Yukisan2021 replies on 8/28/2021 4:21 am:
thanks

VikingTongue0518 56M
7 posts
10/14/2021 6:05 am

Beautiful in English, but I have a hunch it's even more beautiful in Chinese

(though I'll sadly never get to read it as such, coz I'm too old to even start learning the language on a basic level, let alone the advanced level needed to appreciate poetry)


Yukisan2021 replies on 10/15/2021 4:59 am:
Hi, thank you for your praise. The meaning in Chinese and English are same.

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