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How Could She Know?
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How Could She Know? A simple TV mystery An extra without history Her moment on the set so unimportant. How could she know, She stole the show? I watched her walking up behind the lead She was so hot Forget the plot I played the moment back - oh shame indeed! But was she trying? No use denying Directors watch these scenes for future casting But did she sense Quite how intense And how my warm response would be so lasting? Simply dressed Could she have guessed I'd watch her swaying hips time and again? The way she moves I say it proves That lust is something mainly in the brain. And for anyone writing serious poetry who has suffered my well intended critiques in the past -<b> forgive </font></b>me, I sat down to write about seeing this extra on TV and wondering why I was so turned on when she wasn't being overtly or deliberately sexy and had nothing whatsoever to do with the story, and it just came out this way! No pretention toward literary verse of any kind intended |
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In case there are words missing. And for anyone writing serious poetry who has suffered my well intended critiques in the past - forgive me, I sat down to write about seeing this extra on TV and wondering why I was so turned on when she wasn't being overtly or deliberately sexy and had nothing whatsoever to do with the story, and it just came out this way! A simple TV mystery An extra without history Her moment on the set so unimportant. How could she know, She stole the show? I watched her walking up behind the lead She was so hot Forget the plot I played the moment back - oh shame indeed! But was she trying? No use denying Directors watch these scenes for future casting But did she sense Quite how intense And how my warm response would be so lasting? Simply dressed Could she have guessed I'd watch her swaying hips time and again? The way she moves I say it proves That lust is something mainly in the brain
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Yeah, that's right! It surprised me though because there was nothing obvious about her to make me take interest - just one of those weird clicks.......
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I don't think an 'extra' has ever caught my eye but I've definitely preferred supporting actors over the star. As for your poetry .... I'm going to give you a "Pass" cuz it's better than most around here. It could've used one more verse but I don't think even I could've rhymed "important" Opportunity may knock only once, but temptation bangs on the door forever!
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I don't think an 'extra' has ever caught my eye but I've definitely preferred supporting actors over the star. As for your poetry .... I'm going to give you a "Pass" cuz it's better than most around here. It could've used one more verse but I don't think even I could've rhymed "important" But maybe we can rhyme "unimportant"........... What about, "She caused a massive issue And made me need a tissue But thankfully I found one that's absorbent." Would that do?
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She caused a massive issue And made me need a tissue But thankfully I found one that's absorbent." Would that do? That does quite well. Bravo! Opportunity may knock only once, but temptation bangs on the door forever!
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OMG! i did the exact same thing with some random movie that i watched that i heard was popular with all the women (whoever they are, they've got terrible taste!) The lead guy was a dancer. He and a whole bunch of other men danced with their shirts off, and they were all super hot. EXCEPT that - i wasn't impressed with ANY of the lead men - it was just one of the dancers way in the back, who didn't have any significant part -- he caught my eye. And i hunted him down. I found a whole series that he was in, in which he WAS the lead! So, even though that movie was a total dud, in my opinion, i found a man worth looking at among the extras! lol  But he didn't inspire a poem... --Author Unknown
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She caused a massive issue And made me need a tissue But thankfully I found one that's absorbent." Would that do? That does quite well. Bravo!
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The hot extras normal get killed off early. Great poem!! A Man who knows how to use his tongue is extremely useful!
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The hot extras normal get killed off early. Great poem!!
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OMG! i did the exact same thing with some random movie that i watched that i heard was popular with all the women (whoever they are, they've got terrible taste!) The lead guy was a dancer. He and a whole bunch of other men danced with their shirts off, and they were all super hot. EXCEPT that - i wasn't impressed with ANY of the lead men - it was just one of the dancers way in the back, who didn't have any significant part -- he caught my eye. And i hunted him down. I found a whole series that he was in, in which he WAS the lead! So, even though that movie was a total dud, in my opinion, i found a man worth looking at among the extras! lol But he didn't inspire a poem...
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