first date after online.....  

MelbLife 56M
196 posts
8/19/2021 6:36 pm
first date after online.....


first date after online.....
What is the dream and image carried
In heart and mind find
Talk a while and conversation have
Learn something about the other
An inkling of chemistry
An inkling of erotic mystery
A hunger aligned your own
A philosophy close
And then arrange meet
see if chemistry can leap
from small screen into life
if allure can survive sunlight
you talk awhile sizing
any lies about height or size of cup
and get used this strange voice
still it must be your choice
so lean in and lips brush
against cheek and turn and meet
lips lips a first touch
deep inside the sudden rush
the roller coaster descending down
in pit of stomach fallen away
your heart beat speed rocket
so nice those lips which you sup
and hands tangle over each other
hold entwined as if bodies of two lovers
the erotic thoughts rolling in your head
wonder how might curl together in bed
such a quickening of what expected
wonder if because for too long neglected
is it this person or within yourself
because of joy or too long on shelf
the meeting in the cafe ends clumsy
how do you end something you want to extend
holding back and wanting to move forward
not to be too eager is goddamn awkward
and walked back to where car is parked
lean in again and kissing feel again the spark
an arousal sweep through body raw
you do not want to move from this door
could lean against car evening long
sharing kisses deep passionate and strong
too fast too slow are now just words
those caressing hands slip over curves
this heat you feel and so light-headed
is it to soon to say you want to be bedded
are you that type of person
don't you want longer to be certain
is only first meeting physical you have had
then again the talks online covered much
breathless in these kisses you enjoy
is this chemistry deep or just some ploy
to draw you out of your depth and then
you might drown and feel hurt again
these kisses though they seem to ask so little
just lean in and enjoy as lips meet in the middle
what should you do on this first date
leap right in or should you wait?



And in support of this poem/thought, I added another post containing a poll. Looking forward to your answer/s!

MelbLife 56M
209 posts
8/20/2021 4:22 am

    Quoting author51:
    I have had first meets like this, that ended up in a much different second one. Your wonderful prose hit close to home about how first meets can be with all those questions.If the kiss at the end is one that you do not want to end, the chemistry will carry over from online in to the bedroom..xoxo
sometimes you think you hit the mark with what you write, get the anticipation, the nerves, the moments...just right. Capture the tension. That was the aim and think I got it as I sought to capture.

Those questions, always those questions.


author51 58F
124028 posts
8/19/2021 10:59 pm

I have had first meets like this, that ended up in a much different second one. Your wonderful prose hit close to home about how first meets can be with all those questions.If the kiss at the end is one that you do not want to end, the chemistry will carry over from online in to the bedroom..xoxo


MelbLife 56M
209 posts
8/19/2021 10:34 pm

Had a read. Nice simple strong hopeful happy-ending story - after you were patient! Congratulations, and all the best to you, and the one you found.


lonlyforlove2 78M
33439 posts
8/19/2021 7:50 pm

A nice writing, It fits the two bog post of my past, with reguade to the first meeting. If you have time browse over and take a peep, Episode I, just like Star Wars, can39t get them in line Then read second: Episode II, let the force be with me. It can happen.. It did happen and it is still going good today.. thanks for the very good read, have a good evening..

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MelbLife 56M
209 posts
8/19/2021 6:38 pm

an inner conversation we often have....those second thoughts, those inner pressures - what would others do, are you being too forward, or not enough, what was expected in meeting, what is accepted, what...

...only each alone can decide.... so a poll I must also add to support the poem done...


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